Blood Drive Critique

Evan-

Constructive- turn up song on some interview and turn down/detach audio from b-roll clips
Positive- good voice overs, tell story very well

Nick-

Constructive- turn up sound on voice overs, and show interviewee more
Positive- good variety of shots

Allison-

Constructive- leave room in between voice overs and interviews, some jump cuts
Positive- interview shots set up nicely 

Courtney-

Constructive- turn down background noise in first clip, more b-roll and J edits
Positive- voice overs tell great story

Dema-

Constructive- turn interview sound up, turn down nat noise no some shots
Positive- great variety of shots

Rosie-

Constructive- shots shaky, turn sound up for voice overs and interview shots
Positive- good shots

Kierstyn-

Constructive- turn up voice overs
Positive- good b-roll

Rylee-

Constructive- some sound issues on interview
Positive- really good J and L edits

Catherine-

Constructive- too short of voice overs, interview shots too long, needs more b-roll 
Positive-tells good story

Alex-

Constructive- needs more interview, don't forget rule of thirds on interview shots
Positive- great shots

Mitch-

Constructive- turn voice overs up
Positive- rule of thirds followed nicely, story easy to follow

Nicole-

Constructive- put b-roll in between interview
Positive- content put together nicely-flows

Drew-

Constructive- first voice over too long, interview too loud
Positive- nice variety of shots

Emily-

Constructive- more b-roll
Positive- good J and L edits

Conlin-

Constructive- first voice over too short, one jump cut
Positive- great story 

Cyle-

Constructive- voice over not at beginning, interview of Dr. Poss too quiet
Positive- story easy to follow

Jacob-

Constructive- turn voice overs up
Positive- story easy to follow and good shots

Abbey-

Constructive- first voice over too long, rule of thirds not followed in sign shot, one jump cut
Positive-

Amy-

Constructive- turn voice overs up
Positive- great intro voice over

Alyssa-

Constructive- more J and L edits
Positive- good voice overs

Chelsea-

Constructive- more variety of shots
Positive- good intro voice over


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